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The Colorado Territorial Prison sat at the foot of the Sangre de Cristo range in Cañon City, and on the morning of April 9, 1882, a clerk who had processed more releases than he could remember handed Arthur Thorne a manila envelope containing the contents of his trouser pockets from the day he was processed in—a pocketknife with a cracked handle, a folded handkerchief, four dollars and thirty cents—and a train ticket to Bitter Creek, Colorado Territory.
Thorne looked at the ticket. He didn’t recognize the handwriting on the envelope.
“It was sent six months ago,” the clerk said, in the tone of a man who found this neither interesting nor unusual. “Held for your release date. You’re to board at the Cañon City station this afternoon. Train departs at three.”
He walked out the front gate at half past eight in the morning.
The sky was the thing that hit him first. Not the smell, not the sound, not the absence of walls—the sky. He had forgotten, in two years of institutional ceilings and exercise yards with their hard borders of stone and wire, that sky was something you could see all of at once. He stood on the road outside the gate and looked up at it and it went in all directions simultaneously, which was obvious and was also something his body needed a moment to process.
The mountains were south of him, white at the peaks and dark-forested below, and between him and the mountains there was nothing except open ground and the smell of April—wet earth and dry grass and somewhere behind that the particular clean smell of altitude that you couldn’t get anywhere else in the country.
His sentence had been five years. He had served two, early release contingent on his continued cooperation with the federal prosecution of six men in Denver whose names were in Ellen’s evidence file, and whose cooperation had in turn been dependent on believing that silence was more expensive than speech.
Three of the six had pled. Two had been convicted at trial. The sixth was in a courtroom in Denver right now watching a jury that had been listening to Thorne’s testimony for three days and showed every indication of having already made up its mind. The prosecution had told him the day before his release that his presence would no longer be required. He’d thanked them for letting him know.
He stood on the road outside the prison for a while, just standing, getting used to the dimensions of the world.
Then he walked to the train station, bought a cup of coffee from the counter inside, and sat down and waited for the three o’clock.
***
The Denver and Rio Grande ran south out of Cañon City and then climbed northwest through the passes that two winters ago had been sealed with snow and death. Thorne sat by the window and watched the landscape change from the flat scrub of the valley floor to the steepening walls of the gorge to the forested slopes above it, the peaks still white against the April sky. Other passengers in the car paid him no attention. He was a thin man in his early forties in a gray coat that was a year out of fashion, carrying nothing heavier than a small bag, with the particular stillness of a man who has learned to occupy whatever space he’s given without spilling into the margins.
He’d learned a lot of things in two years that he hadn’t known he didn’t know. How to exist in a confined space without going to war with it. How to wait without the waiting becoming its own kind of damage. How to be a man who had done a specific thing and was paying for it in a specific way, without constantly rehearsing the thing or anticipating the end of the paying.
He’d testified four times. Once at Court’s trial, which he’d done before he surrendered himself to the federal marshals in Denver. Once at the first trial of the Denver executives, three months after he began his sentence, brought in under guard to a courtroom where the railroad’s lawyers had tried for two days to establish that his testimony was self-serving and therefore worthless, and where the prosecutor had responded by reading twelve pages of operational planning documents in Thorne’s own handwriting into the record and asking whether a man who had already confessed to everything had any reason to lie about anything.
Once at the second trial, the following year. And once at a deposition for a civil suit brought by the families of the miners who’d died in the Bitter Creek shafts, which was the hardest of the four because it was the smallest—just a conference room, just lawyers, no gallery, no process to move through, just questions and answers and the faces of three women across the table who had come to hear a man explain why their husbands were dead.
He’d answered every question. He hadn’t made it easy on himself by making it easy on his questioners.
The train passed through the narrowest part of the gorge and emerged onto the high plateau and Thorne could see north and west for what felt like the first of the country, the mountains arranged along the horizon like teeth, the passes visible as notches in the ridge where the snow had pulled back enough to show rock. He’d ridden through one of those notches twice in a hard winter, once heading south with evidence and a prisoner and once following a trail of horse tracks in softening snow toward a cabin where a man he’d built was waiting to kill him. The mountains looked different from a train window in April, peaceful in the way that things look peaceful when you’re watching them from inside glass with warm coffee going cold in your hand.
The train stopped twice before Bitter Creek. He didn’t get off. He watched the platforms and the faces on them and the small accumulated evidence of two years of normal life continuing to happen in places he hadn’t been, and he thought about what it would mean to arrive in a place that had continued without him for two years.
***
He hired a horse at the station and rode north on the road he’d ridden south on two years before with Court behind him and the saddlebags full of evidence and Darrow’s blood on his coat.
The road was better. That was the first thing. Someone had graded it over the winter, filled in the ruts and the drainage cuts that had made it treacherous in the thaw. The creek was visible from the road as he climbed, running clear and steady between its banks, nothing in it now but water and the light refracted through it. The fields on either side showed cattle—a dozen head on the eastern pasture, a dozen more further north, grazing on grass that was coming in green under the April sun. Someone had run fence along the road’s western edge, new posts still light-colored before the weather got to them.
He took his time. Not because he was reluctant but because the approach deserved to be taken slowly, the way you approach something you don’t want to look at carelessly.
The town appeared in stages as the road rose and the tree line fell back on the western side. The church steeple first, visible above the rooftops, the same steeple where Jesse Harker had sat with a Winchester on a cold morning two years ago, patient and still, picking his shots. Then the boardinghouse—the south-facing porch, the good window on the upper floor where he had slept badly and remembered things he hadn’t wanted to remember and looked out at mountains that were trying to kill the town below them. The main street. The Lucky Strike. Aldridge’s store with a new sign above the door, the lettering fresh.
Ellen was on the porch.
She was standing at the railing with papers in one hand and a coffee cup in the other, looking south down the road in the particular way she looked at things she was thinking about rather than seeing. Her hair had more gray in it than two years ago. She was wearing the same wool coat she’d been wearing the first morning he’d come downstairs and found her in the kitchen, which made a kind of sense—a woman who had spent two years building a case and then spent two more years corresponding with federal courts and newspaper editors and territorial legislators didn’t spend a lot of her time thinking about her coat.
She saw him. He watched her see him. She went still on the porch railing for a moment—not surprised exactly, more like a person who has been expecting a thing to happen and still has to collect themselves when it does. She looked at him coming up the road on the hired horse and she looked at him for the length of three or four seconds while he covered the last hundred yards.
Then: “Coffee’s on.”
She turned and went inside. She left the door open.
He tied the horse at the post and stood on the porch for a moment looking at the open door. The light inside was the light of a house that had been occupied every day for two years, warm and specific and particular to the person who had been in it. He could smell the coffee. He could hear the sound of a cup being set on the counter.
He went inside.
***
He left her to whatever she was doing in the kitchen and walked to the Lucky Strike that afternoon.
The saloon had been repaired and repainted and someone had replaced the bar’s back mirror, which had been cracked during the fight when Hicks had taken eight men through the rear door. The new mirror was clearer than the old one had been and it gave the room back to itself with more honesty than saloon mirrors usually aspired to.
Hicks was at the bar. He wasn’t drinking—it was the middle of the afternoon and Hicks had always been a man who drank on his own schedule, which had nothing to do with the time of day and everything to do with what the day had required of him. He was talking to the man behind the bar about something involving the number three shaft, which had been re-certified and re-timbered over the past eighteen months and was producing again. He looked up when Thorne came in and he didn’t look away and he didn’t change his expression.
He reached across the bar, took a glass, and poured it from the bottle in front of him and set it at the spot beside his elbow.
Thorne sat down on the stool.
They drank in silence for a while. Not the loaded silence of two men who have things to say and are choosing not to say them, but the quieter, more neutral silence of two men who have already said everything that needed saying and are sitting with what’s left. Hicks’s hands on the bar were the hands of a man who had spent two years working the mine he’d spent the previous winter watching kill his friends. The mine was producing. Will Merrick’s wife in Leadville had received a letter from the town fund and a letter from the federal court’s restitution process and a letter from Thorne, which she had not answered. He didn’t hold that against her.
“Mine’s doing well,” Hicks said eventually. Not a question.
“So I hear.”
Hicks looked at his glass. “New safety inspector comes out of Denver every three months. Checks the timbers, certifies the shafts. Railroad’s lawyers tried to get the inspection requirement thrown out. Judge kept it.”
“Good.”
“Ridge’s records helped,” Hicks said. “At the safety hearing. His notebook with the shafts and the dates and the notations. They used it to establish what negligence looked like so they’d know what to require in the inspections going forward.” He paused. “Didn’t feel right, exactly. Using his work to fix what his work broke. But it’s what we had.”
“It’s what we had,” Thorne agreed.
Hicks picked up his glass and turned it in his hands and set it down. “You’re back,” he said. It wasn’t a question and it wasn’t an accusation and it wasn’t anything except the plain statement of a fact that still required some adjustment.
“For now,” Thorne said.
Hicks looked at him steadily. He was a big man and he had always been a man who occupied his size with the confidence of someone who had never needed to prove it, and two years had not changed that. What two years had changed was something harder to name—a particular quality of the anger that had driven him through the winter was gone, not replaced by peace exactly but by something more workable.
The anger had been the fuel, and now it had burned—and what was underneath it was a man who ran a mine and argued about inspection requirements and had apparently taken up some sort of relationship with Aldridge that involved standing at the bar together and talking about town business with the gruff, careful proximity of men who have decided to be functional neighbors.
Not friendship, not hatred. Something that would do.
“Drink’s on me,” Hicks said.
***
Aldridge served him the following morning.
Thorne had needed a few things from the store—nothing significant, the ordinary small purchases of a man who had arrived in a town with very little—and Aldridge was behind the counter when he came in, stocking shelves with the efficiency of a man who had been stocking shelves in this particular store for fifteen years and had the geography of it in his hands without needing to look.
He turned when the bell above the door rang and looked at Thorne for a moment with the expression of a man who had known this conversation was coming and hadn’t decided yet what he wanted it to be.
He came down from the stool and went behind the counter and waited.
Thorne set his list down. Aldridge looked at it and went to fill it without a word, pulling items from the shelves and setting them on the counter one by one with the particular care of a man making sure each item is exactly right before moving to the next. When he’d assembled the order he totaled it and named the price and Thorne paid it.
Aldridge put the money in the drawer and looked at the counter for a moment. Then: “His name was Thomas,” he said. “My nephew. Thomas Aldridge. I don’t know if anyone told you.”
Thorne hadn’t known. “No,” he said.
“He was eighteen. He’d been working for me since he was fifteen—came out from Pueblo when his father died and I needed someone to help with the heavy work. He was quiet. Decent.” Aldridge looked at the counter. “He died in a doorway defending a store that was selling flour at six dollars for ten pounds because I was too afraid to ask the questions I should have asked about where the stock was coming from.”
“The price wasn’t your fault,” Thorne said.
“No,” Aldridge said. “But the not asking was.” He looked up. “I’m not asking you for anything. I want you to know that. I’m not asking for an apology or an explanation or any of it. I just needed to say his name to you once. So you’d know it.”
“Thomas Aldridge,” Thorne said.
Aldridge nodded. He folded his hands on the counter and looked at them.
“Some things just get carried,” he said.
“Yes,” Thorne said. “They do.”
He took his purchases and went out. The bell above the door rang again when it closed, the same bell it had always been.
***
He rode out to the Harker ranch on the third day, not to announce himself but to see that the place was standing. He followed the road north and turned west at the timber line and came up through the trees on the ridge above the ranch the way he’d come down through them two winters ago with Billy Harker in a travois and Jesse beside him and the blizzard beginning to loosen its grip.
The ranch was more than it had been. The main house had a new wing on the south side. The barn had been re-sided. Cattle in the pasture, more than before, the herd rebuilt from the winter’s losses. The fence along the eastern boundary was new—straight posts, tight wire, the kind of fence that takes a season of work and shows it.
Ida was in the yard.
She was standing near the fence with a child on her hip—a small one, a year old at most, dark-haired, looking at the fence post with the focused interest that children bring to objects that are simply there. A man Thorne didn’t recognize was on the other side of the fence working a post-hole digger, a broad-shouldered man in his thirties with the kind of tan that comes from working outside in all seasons. Ida said something to him and he laughed and went back to the post hole.
She turned toward the ridge as if she’d heard something, which she might have—the horse was quiet but not silent on the rocky ground. She looked up toward the trees and found him in them, sixty yards away in the shadow of a spruce with the hired horse standing still at his knee. She looked at him directly. There was no question in her face and no surprise. She held the child against her hip and looked at him for the count of two or three seconds, and then she nodded once—a small, definite motion—and turned back to the man at the fence.
Thorne watched her go. The child on her hip turned its head and looked up at its mother’s face with the particular absorption of very small children who haven’t yet learned to divide their attention. Ida said something to the man again and reached over the fence to touch his arm briefly before going toward the house, and Thorne turned the horse and rode back through the timber toward town.
He didn’t know what the nod had meant precisely. He suspected it didn’t need to mean anything precisely. She had seen him in the trees and she had let him know she’d seen him and she had gone inside. Some accounts were settled and some were simply arrived at, and the difference between the two was something you understood only once you were on the far side of whatever winter had required of you.
***
The letter from Gray was waiting on the table when he got back.
Ellen set it in front of him without comment and went back to the kitchen. It had been sent to the boardinghouse two months ago, addressed to Thorne in Gray’s neat, careful handwriting—the handwriting of a man who had spent twenty years putting things precisely where they needed to be on a page. The return address was a street in the Mission District of San Francisco.
Thorne read it at the table.
Gray wrote without preamble, the way a man writes when he has been composing the letter in his head for a long time and the actual writing is simply the execution of something already decided. He was in San Francisco. He had arrived a year ago with the intention of staying six months and had stayed longer because the city had proved larger than his guilt, which was a useful quality in a city.
He had opened a medical practice in the Mission, serving a largely immigrant population who needed a doctor who spoke English and several other languages and asked no questions about where people had come from or what they had done before they arrived. He wasn’t a minister. He didn’t intend to be a minister again. He had never, in full honesty, been suited to it—he’d been suited to medicine and had spent fifteen years hiding medicine inside a calling that fit him less well, because medicine was what had driven him west and preaching was what the west had offered him, and he had taken what was available. He was done taking what was available.
He mentioned Margaret in the third paragraph. She was well. She was living with him in the house he’d rented on Valencia Street, which was too large for one person and the right size for two. She had found work with a newspaper helping with composition and she was, by his assessment, happier than she had been in Denver, which was not difficult, since Denver had contained the months when two men had come to her door and explained the terms of her brother’s arrangement in plain language and she had not told him until he’d told her first. They had talked about it once and they would probably need to talk about it again and they were learning to live with what the talking couldn’t resolve.
He had been sending money to Bitter Creek. He named the amount, which was substantial—a portion of his practice income every month, directed to the town relief fund through an intermediary. He named it because he was done being anonymous about it. He wasn’t asking for credit. He was asking for the record to be accurate.
The last paragraph was about Thorne. He said he hoped the testimony had gone well, which was a mild way of putting it. He said he hoped what came after would be endurable. He said he thought of Bitter Creek every day, which was the truth, and that he expected he would think of it every day for the rest of his life, which was also the truth, and that he had decided this was the appropriate consequence for a man who had done what he had done and that he had made his peace with carrying it. He didn’t ask for forgiveness and he didn’t extend it. He closed by saying he would write again.
It was signed Oliver Gray.
Thorne put the letter down on the table and looked at it. He thought about Gray in San Francisco treating immigrants who needed a doctor and asked no questions, with Margaret setting type at a newspaper on Valencia Street, in a house that was the right size for two, corresponding with a man in Colorado he would think about every day for the rest of his life.
He laughed.
It came out of him unexpectedly, without buildup—a short, involuntary sound that was partly surprise and partly something more complicated. Ellen looked around the kitchen doorway. He held up the letter in explanation. She waited.
“Gray’s in San Francisco,” he said. “Running a medical practice. His sister’s with him.”
She looked at him for a moment. Then something moved in her face that might have been relief and might have been its own version of the same laugh he’d just had.
“Good,” she said.
It was the right word. He folded the letter and put it in his coat pocket.
***
He visited the cemetery on the fourth day.
It was behind the church, on a gentle east-facing slope where the morning light came early and the grass was already green in April, which was something Bitter Creek had that a lot of mountain towns didn’t: enough south exposure on that slope to get things growing before the last frost. There were flowers on some of the markers—not elaborate, just the small rough flowers that come up in rocky mountain soil without being invited.
He went through them in order.
Merrick’s stone first. Will Merrick, Beloved Husband, with dates and a cross and below the cross, in smaller letters: He Kept His Word. Someone had known him well enough to put that there. The stone was good quality, not a wooden marker—someone had paid for it. The relief fund, maybe, or Hicks out of his own pocket. Thorne stood at it for a while.
Thomas Aldridge’s stone—he had the name now, and it sat differently on the marker than it had when it was a descriptor. Thomas Aldridge, age 18. No elaboration. Just the name and the age and the dates and the fact of the stone, which was more permanent than wood and less permanent than anything deserved to be.
The two miners from the western flank. Callaghan and Breen, who he hadn’t known by name during their lives and didn’t know by anything beyond their names now, which was its own specific failure. He stood at their stones and acknowledged it without trying to do anything with it.
The ranch hand from Harker’s line, whose name had been Amos Garrett and who had been twenty-six and had, according to the stone’s small inscription, been born in Virginia and come west when he was seventeen.
Ridge’s marker was at the end of the row, separate from the others by a few feet—not excluded exactly, but not grouped with them either, which was the honest geography of the thing. The marker was plain wood, not stone, the name and dates in a hand that was unfamiliar to him. He stood at it and thought about the man at the mine entrance, stepping out from behind the timber framing to meet the third enforcer rather than firing from cover, and he thought about the notebook in the tin box and the shed in the hills and the money and the fear and the specific quality of a man deciding that the last thing he did would be the right thing.
He stayed at Ridge’s marker longer than he’d planned to.
At the edge of the cemetery, in the corner by the fence away from the other graves, there was a low mound with no marker at all. Just earth, the grass coming in over it the way grass comes in over anything that stays still long enough.
Thorne stood at Court’s grave and waited for something to come.
Nothing came. He waited longer, giving it time. Still nothing. Not anger, not satisfaction, not the complex relief he’d expected—just the flat, particular absence of feeling that he associated with things that were simply finished. Court was in the ground. The machine Court had run was in the record of three trials and fourteen depositions and Ellen’s two years of documentation and the testimonies of thirty-seven witnesses and a judge’s instructions to a jury that had deliberated for six hours before returning guilty on all counts. The facts of what had been done in Bitter Creek and in three other territories were in places where they couldn’t be unwritten.
That the man responsible for those facts produced no feeling in him at the site of the man’s grave was not the resolution he’d anticipated. He’d expected something—the clean closing of an account, some version of completion. What he felt instead was nothing, which was, he understood standing there, actually worse than hatred. Hatred meant Court had still mattered. The nothing meant he’d been reduced to the accurate category of a solved problem, and Thorne had been in the business of solved problems long enough to know that solutions didn’t carry feeling—they just carried consequence.
He stood at the unmarked grave for a while longer out of a sense that it deserved the standing, regardless of what he did or didn’t feel. Then he went to the church.
***
The service was Sunday morning. He hadn’t intended to attend—he’d been walking past and the door was open and the sound of a young voice reading from Scripture had reached him on the street and he’d stopped.
The new minister was young. Mid-twenties, Thorne guessed, from somewhere eastern, with the earnest, unguarded manner of a man who hadn’t yet had enough tests to know which parts of himself would hold. He preached with conviction and not much craft, which was the right combination for this congregation at this point in the town’s life—people who needed someone who believed what he was saying enough to say it plainly, even if the saying wasn’t polished.
The sermon was about carrying weight. About the difference between a burden that belongs to you and a burden that has been placed on you without your consent, and the necessity of knowing which is which before you can do anything useful about either. It wasn’t a sophisticated sermon. It was a necessary one.
Thorne sat in the last pew, the same pew he’d sat in two years ago when he’d waited for the congregation to empty so he could bar the door and confront Gray. The wood of the pew was the same wood, worn smooth from years of people sitting in it bringing whatever they had brought and leaving with whatever they could leave behind.
He didn’t pray. He hadn’t prayed in years and wasn’t going to start now, and the young minister’s conviction that prayer was available to anyone in the room regardless of what they’d done was a conviction Thorne respected without being able to share. But he didn’t leave. He sat in the back pew with his hat in his hands and listened to the voice from the front and looked at the plain cross above the altar—the same rough wooden cross that had been there when Gray stood behind the pulpit, unchanged by the two years and everything in them—and he let the morning pass through the building the way morning passes through any space where people bring what they’re carrying to see if any of it will lift.
Some of it, maybe. Enough to keep sitting.
***
Ellen was in the kitchen when he came back, which was where she always was in the mornings, working at the table with the accumulated correspondence of a woman who had spent two years following a federal case through its proceedings and was now, apparently, helping three other towns in two other territories understand what documentation they would need to pursue similar cases. The stack of papers on her table was as tall as it had ever been.
She looked up when he came in and then looked back at her papers, which was the acknowledgment he preferred.
He sat across from her. He looked at the ceiling. Near the chimney on the north side, the plaster had water damage—a brown stain spreading from the corner, a hairline crack running down from it toward the window frame. It was the kind of damage you noticed when you were looking for it and didn’t notice when you weren’t.
“What happens now?” Ellen said. She wasn’t looking at him. She was reading a letter she held in her hand.
He thought about it. He could ride. He could go south or north or west and find other work—he understood systems and he understood how to read people and he understood the specific language of money moving through institutions and hiding what it was doing, and there was legitimate work that used all three of those things. He had a name that meant something now in certain circles, not necessarily something he was proud of but something.
“The roof needs patching,” he said.
She turned the letter over. “North side near the chimney,” she said. “It’s been going since February.”
“I can do that.”
“I know you can.”
He looked at the ceiling for another moment. Then: “Who sent the ticket?”
He’d been turning it over since the clerk had handed him the envelope. The handwriting on the outside had been unfamiliar, which might have meant Ellen had used someone else’s hand, or might have meant something else. No one in Bitter Creek had owed him a ticket. No one in Denver had reason to want him back in Bitter Creek specifically. The railroad’s lawyers certainly hadn’t sent it. He’d been carrying the question for four days without a satisfying answer.
Ellen set the letter down. She looked at him across the table.
“I sent it,” she said. “Six months before your release date. I wrote to the prison administrator and asked what they needed to hold a ticket for a specific inmate, and they told me and I sent it.” She folded her hands. “I’d been following the case. I knew the cooperation agreement and I knew what early release looked like from the outside and I knew when you were likely to be done. I wanted there to be a ticket waiting when the gates opened, whether you used it or not.”
He looked at her. “Why?”
She thought about this in the way she thought about things that deserved precision. “Because I’d been leaving the door open for two years,” she said. “And a door that’s left open is either an invitation or it’s just a door that hasn’t been closed, and I decided six months before you got out that I wanted it to be the former.” She paused. “You didn’t have to use it.”
“I used it.”
“Yes,” she said. “You did.”
She stood and went to the stove and poured coffee into the cup that was already there from the morning and set it in front of him. Outside, the creek ran over its stones with the steady clear sound of water that had finished being ice and was simply water again. The morning light came through the window at the angle it came through in April, different from the winter angle, warmer, touching the kitchen table and the papers on it and the two cups and the hands on both sides of the table.
He picked up the coffee.
He had no plan. He had the four dollars and thirty cents from the envelope and a pocketknife with a cracked handle and a gray coat that was a year out of fashion and a name that meant something he was still determining the full extent of. He had an understanding of systems and the patience that two years in a small space had given him for things that took time. He had the specific and undecorated skill of a man who had spent three years building something designed to destroy and then spent two years undoing as much of it as could be undone.
He had a ceiling that needed patching.
“I’ll need materials,” he said.
“Aldridge has everything,” Ellen said. She sat back down and picked up her letter. “Tell him I said to put it on account.”
He drank his coffee. She worked on her papers. The creek ran outside. The morning moved through the kitchen in the way morning moves through a room when the room is occupied by people who know how to be in it together.
Nothing was resolved and nothing needed to be, which was perhaps the most honest thing that could be said about where they had arrived. He had done what he had done and he had answered for a portion of it and would spend the remaining portions of his life answering for the rest in whatever ways were available to him. She had built the case and seen it into the record and would keep building toward whatever the next case was, because that was what Ellen Cole did with the thing that had happened to her and the skill it had produced. They had come to the same kitchen table by different routes and they were drinking coffee in the April morning light and the door was open behind him and the roof needed patching and the creek was clear.
He set the cup down. He picked it up again.
Outside, Bitter Creek went about its Tuesday. The Lucky Strike was opening for the midday. Aldridge was stocking shelves. Hicks was at the mine. Somewhere north of town Jesse Harker was moving cattle on ground that a machine had tried to steal and hadn’t. Somewhere at the Harker ranch Ida was going about the ordinary life she had built from the rubble of what Thorne’s operation had taken from her. In San Francisco, Gray was seeing patients on Valencia Street with his sister in the house and money leaving his account each month for a town he would think about every day for the rest of his life.
The spring was real. The creek was clear. The graves behind the church were permanent and the markers on them were the most honest accounting available.
The roof needed patching.
He finished his coffee, put on his hat, and went to find Aldridge.
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I liked this book. The characters were well developed as was the plot. It showed the greed that people can have as well as those people who want to help others in need.
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liked your book and I was hoping for alittle more closing in the epilog. Alittle more romance.
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